I thought that Lauren’s power point was very good as it included a lot of relevant information and pictures. I particularly liked the floors plans that were drawn out to show the layout of the event. It was also easy to read.
Ways to improve the presentation would be to correct some spelling errors and to also list a number of serial killer examples. I also thought that the costing and pricing lists could be two separate lists and to research average prices for catering and a DJ. However the costing ranges massively in price and also the client we are pitching to may have contacts.